Little bros commercial
09-11-07, 03:05 PM
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Little bros commercial
little bro shot a commercial for film class....put it together real fast...not bad if you ask me leave comments for him..he likes the different pov's
http://youtube.com/watch?v=EGEoK0piJso
http://youtube.com/watch?v=EGEoK0piJso
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09-12-07, 10:00 AM
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Too many CU of driver, not enough details of car.
All of the external driving shots except for the one before the car mounted sheel shot were great. Most of the car drive bys were well shot/thought out. Opening shot is good, as are the final driving shots.
Some cuts need to be slipped or rolled slightly to hit the beat. Couple of them were just off a few frames.
Music fading back up should match the turn of the ****, bit early right now.
Could have used an insert of the iphone with "incoming call" with finger hitting "ignore" That would better sell the ignoring real life and being in the moment of driving.
Maybe some O-T-S MW shots of road ahead. Or some drive bys from foreground so we see rear of car.
The gauges are a bit funky dissolving into the rear badge. I would almost consider starting with the badges, then to gauges starting up, then to a drive away. Final shot of car pulling up to the grille logo with titles falling over that would be a great ending.
Perhaps a different font for the quote at the end as well can help give it a more luxurious feeling.
Overall pretty good though. (I probably looked at it a bit more in depth since it's kinda what I do for a living)
All of the external driving shots except for the one before the car mounted sheel shot were great. Most of the car drive bys were well shot/thought out. Opening shot is good, as are the final driving shots.
Some cuts need to be slipped or rolled slightly to hit the beat. Couple of them were just off a few frames.
Music fading back up should match the turn of the ****, bit early right now.
Could have used an insert of the iphone with "incoming call" with finger hitting "ignore" That would better sell the ignoring real life and being in the moment of driving.
Maybe some O-T-S MW shots of road ahead. Or some drive bys from foreground so we see rear of car.
The gauges are a bit funky dissolving into the rear badge. I would almost consider starting with the badges, then to gauges starting up, then to a drive away. Final shot of car pulling up to the grille logo with titles falling over that would be a great ending.
Perhaps a different font for the quote at the end as well can help give it a more luxurious feeling.
Overall pretty good though. (I probably looked at it a bit more in depth since it's kinda what I do for a living)
09-12-07, 05:17 PM
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Not bad at all. Part of my work involves Televison Production and I work often with 30+ television students on a few courses at a local college....so appreciate his efforts. Not sure about the phone....made me shudder thinking about tossing my phone on the wood consol like that....be a thousand scraths.
09-14-07, 08:40 AM
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Thanks for all the feedback he appreciates the comments. Not sure if he is re editing it. I think the i phone part is coming out. He may get best vid for the semester. Thanks again. Hopefully more lexus videos will be coming our way from him.